Mind Games, the 11th entry in the Incognito Series, is disappointing. The relationship between the primary characters is very improbable. The hero’s poisonous jealousy, along with the heroine’s emotional fragility, makes them an unsuited couple. The dialogue supports the suspense element of the storyline, but the characters’ inner thoughts seem more melodramatic than enlightening. Readers will be impressed with the suspense plot, but will ultimately be disappointed in the character development.