This story needs help. The characters are not fully developed and the plot lacks focus. The story jumps around and the emotional connections are missing.
Ally Kendal, Rob Ward and Jackson Smith were the best of friends 10 years ago. Ally was engaged to marry Rob right after high school graduation. Events explode around the three, including Ally cheating on Rob with Jackson. When Jackson’s girlfriend, Susan, is found dead in Ally’s house it adds to the chaos that ends with Ally leaving town. Rob and Jackson continue to have feelings that are not resolved and neither is Susan’s murder.Then Ally returns. (APHRODISIA, Sep., 304 pp, $14.00)