YOUR RANCH OR MINE?
YOUR RANCH OR MINE? (2) by Cindy Kirk: Years ago, law clerk Anna Andersson broke architect Mitch Donavan's heart. Now they're both back in their hometown, and fate keeps throwing them together. Acknowledging that they have unfinished emotional business is just the start. Anna was pregnant when she left town, and Mitch never knew. Telling him now is risky, especially since their relationship isn't exactly on steady ground to begin with, but Anna's lived with the guilt for too long already. The familiar plot works fine here. The problem is too much emphasis on Mitch and Anna's past -- to the point that it completely overshadows what's happening in the present.